Part of what I was going for was that over the top style that Chandler mocked. Specifically the clunky phrase was selected because I wanted an incomprehensible action and to use a more simple and direct phrase would go against my intent. But you're right that normally you'd want prose a lot less abstract. Thanks for reading!
Part of what I was going for was that over the top style that Chandler mocked. Specifically the clunky phrase was selected because I wanted an incomprehensible action and to use a more simple and direct phrase would go against my intent. But you're right that normally you'd want prose a lot less abstract. Thanks for reading!
This was trippy and blew my mind! Great job 👏
Funny and different - I think my favorite line is "We were live-streamed" - thanks!
Love the imagery!